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Hello, I was wondering if you could review my short story Principle Mackenzie. It's rated a mild R, if that matters. For language and themes(?) Oh, and I will misuse ...

Hello Evi, I was wondering if you could critique my short story called Principle Mackenzie Its a smidget under 1500 words. Oh, and comma abuse will be present. So don't ...

Welcome to Yws. There are places in the welcome forum where you can meet people/ tell others about yourself/make writing buddies and whatnot. Just so you know; there is a ...

Hello, I've read this about nine hundred times and I never got around to criquing it. My goodness. First off, one of my pet peeves is average kids having ridiculously ...

I have another one. And theres probably more comma abuse in this post. Sorry. A little under 1500 words. Principle Mackenzie

Hey, I hate to be a dirty rule-monger, but we do have a 2:1 review-to-post ratio on this website. Not that I'm holding it against you; but just so you ...

Hey could you look at something I just posted Principal about 1500 words. Thanks a ton. If I like your review I'll ask you to review everything else I write. ...

Any and all suspensions pending expulsion were accompanied with pages of information, most of it useless hearsay. Some accusations, a handful of rumors… but if the parents pulled enough strings, ...

Hello, I would like this looked at It's called scarecrow, and it's a smidget over 1500 words Short story. Thanks a ton!

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Welcome to my castle, lonely traveler. How nice of you to drop by. Would you like some tea or--- a review, per chance? Art Poetry Scripts Fanfiction Parody Essays Other ...

Hello, I was wondering what your definition of horror was. Not for this story that I want you to review, but a future one... Anyways, 1,658 words. Scarecrow.

Oh, blue! It may be a smidget over 1500, but It's not that long! 1,658 words for your convenience. It's called scarecrow. I hope you enjoy.

Wow, I really really really really really liked it. I think the ending was good-- I don't believe in redemption or regret. They're overrated. I have to admit though-- i ...

Will review some of your stuff if you review my story scarecrow and another story that I haven't posted yet. I'll review three works if you review those two. Thanks ...