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  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Bella's 30th Birthday

    I think this was a solid story; but being a hater of twilight I also think your talents could be used on characters and worlds not copyrighted. That said; it ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Critiquing Characters

    Everyone always cites Strunk & White when they're talking about grammar usage... but I've heard from a great many grammar Nazis that Strunk & White's Elements of Style is a ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Lockdown

    Hey Emerald! I really like this story and I'm no good at grammar so I'm just going to say what I thought. MMkay... about the baby. I love the idea ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Idea Dilemma!

    what kind of fanfiction? And the hard-and-fast nanowrimo rules are that you can't finish a half-something but really, it's whatever works for you. I would say if you have a ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: how can I 'undo' a 'mary sue'?

    This is a little overdue, but it's gary stue test; you check the boxes and based on your score you know whether or not your character is a mary sue. ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Motivation Problems

    I had a similar experience to Ross Sharpay. And though some might suggest writing through it; when I tried that nothing came out but utter garbage. Then one day I ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Principal Mackenzie

    Sorry, that was a typo. Mrs. Willshire= Mrs. Damer. It's fixed now.

    Oct 10, 2009
  • NovMo Archives Re: Script Frenzy?

    I failed scriptfrenzy last year, but I think I have a better chance of making it this year. And scriptfrenzy helped me with dialogue so much; it was definitely worth ...

    Oct 10, 2009
  • NovMo Archives Re: NaNoWriMo Survival Kits

    This is my first year of nanowrimo, so I'm not totally confident in this list, but we'll see. Snacks within arm's reach (healthy and unhealthy) My computer usb drive notebook ...

    Oct 10, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Red Ink Reviews

    Thank you Stevie; you did a fabulous job on my last piece. I was wondering if you could critique this for me as well. Principle Mackenzie Other Fiction Rated Tv14, ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Force me to review please

    Wow. That review was not what I expected; but you did a great, great job. Want some more? Scarecrow, a little over fifteen hundred words. And there will be semi-colon ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Principal Mackenzie

    Thank you phoenix! But one thing: this wasn't "rape," this man isn't a rapist. He's a guardian who is (allegedly) having consensual sex with a minor; a subdivision of rape ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: How You Get Famous

    Sorry Josh. Joshua. Paul. But I happen to be a good friend of Andrea's and have been hearing about the production of "a comedic short story with an unreliable narrator." ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: How You Get Famous

    Andrea, post more because right now no one is getting that this is a comedy; no one is getting this post at all, actually. (read rather obnoxious comments above me.)

    Oct 9, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: You scratch my back, I'll scratch yours?

    Hey, I'm back with another story. Here is Principle Mackenzie, set in the same world as Scarecrow. Thank you a ton.

    Oct 8, 2009


They who talk all day of beauty call all the plain things dirty
— John Darnielle