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I was going to add this to my original post, but seeing as its so long already... I really liked the ending; it was very neat and left no room ...

Okay, i have many wonderful things to say about this novel but I have to go with my initial reaction, the freshest thing on my mind, and that is the ...

I dont know if there are enough words to describe my feelings for this site... thanks to yws I started writing, tackled nanowrimo, finished my first novel and realized for ...

First year wish everone good luck I'm Littlemissgluttonous over there it sounds origianal but its my username for everything but yws.

So verytime her Cancer would bother her I could hear her scream. I would cover my ears and cry and pray. Now all that praying had gone to waist verytime=everytime ...

Wow. I went to that youtube video; it was amazing. Very professional-looking. I've never had any problems writing in my daily journal; but on my computer... arghh. And everything that ...

Huh. I'm going to say 7/10 It's not bad, but there are better ways to get across the setting, or tone. It was the kind of day where sadness slid ...

A potmarked girl who paints on her eyeliner and is addicted to drama and texting. She thinks she's "gangsta" but she's really a whiny nobody who could lose a few ...

If I had a stick I would wrap a scarf around it, like a very childish makeshift saddle, and pretend to be a vaquero.

Yeah, I always wake up with the most vibrant dream in my head and announce "I'll write it down!" But dreams are unusually tedious things that just drone on and ...

Hey Pudin I would say write out your high school idea; but don't let your vampire story be tucked away forever. I really enjoyed it.

That is the coolest idea I have heard in a long, long time. Honestly. It would be superfool if you played with cause and effect; starting with one continent and ...

I think you should make the cult a demon-worshipping cult; you could play with names and sins and have supercool anti-communion rituals... Second one is the best, hands down.

Your premise sounds great. I would say, though, that you should have some important-but-not-as-important characters be straight. Or else it feels, I don't know, too gimicky. It's obvious you already ...

This summer, I decided that I wanted to increase my typing speed tenfold. So I got a roll of that super-adhesive opaque tape and cut out little squares, placing them ...