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Re: Royal Reviews: critiques from the empress
Finished with Young Gun; those were beautiful photographs. Anyone else?
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Re: Concepts
First I want to thank you for asking me to review your work; I've never reviewed photography before but I'll give it my best shot. Overall Wherever you took these ...
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Re: A modern romance?
I'm going to be perfectly honest, I didn't like it. I guess it just wasn't for me, so this won't help you very much except to tell you the thoughts ...
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Re: First person?
I agree with everyone above. Being in fist person is kind of like taking on a fake identity; you must always try to stay in disguise, per se, and not ...
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Re: The Prologue
I've never written a prologue, but If I ever feel the need I'll reference this article; it may everything very neat and simplified; I always hear about prologues being a ...
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Re: "It would be great if there was a writing program that..."
I wish there was a writing program that told you when your writing wasn't nearly as witty as you imagined in your head. You can always read it out loud ...
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Re: Editing Tips Anyone?
I've been struggling with this myself, and although all of these comments were helpful, I thought I'd add a question of my own. How do you go about editing huge ...
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Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
I agree with the kitten claws above me. I've read far too many great and poor books to mistake Stephenie Meyer as anything but a mediocre writer in the romance ...
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Re: Is Anyone Else Sad?
I was in a huge funk after nanowrimo ended, which may have also been due too my leaving yws for a month to write the novel.... and during this december ...
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Re: In the mood for a review, per chance?
Could I get a rain check on this? I'm going to edit my nanonovel and post it after its readable. It's about forty thousand words right now; it may be ...
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Re: Three
I thought this piece was excellent. I guess I'll start backwards, since the end is what's freshest in my mind... it always seems that women will give away their name ...
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Re: Alone
I sort of do, sort of don't agree with Karsten. You did use repetition a lot, and It is slightly over-the-top, but I can understand that, if you whittle this ...
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Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when going for extended amounts of time without writing gives you anxiety and depression, and sitting down to your computer to type out a story ...
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Re: What would YOU do?
Stop writing; maybe become a boxer. Or try for official title of empress of the universe. Because If I'm the greatest writer of all time, absolutely anything is within my ...
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Re: What would your characters do?
Not sure I understand the statement (fata- fairy of the arts?) But Lilith, being musically challenged, would sleep with the judges and, depending on the size and abilities of the ...
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