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  • WRFF Archive Re: Royal Reviews: critiques from the empress

    Finished with Young Gun; those were beautiful photographs. Anyone else?

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Concepts

    First I want to thank you for asking me to review your work; I've never reviewed photography before but I'll give it my best shot. Overall Wherever you took these ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A modern romance?

    I'm going to be perfectly honest, I didn't like it. I guess it just wasn't for me, so this won't help you very much except to tell you the thoughts ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: First person?

    I agree with everyone above. Being in fist person is kind of like taking on a fake identity; you must always try to stay in disguise, per se, and not ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: The Prologue

    I've never written a prologue, but If I ever feel the need I'll reference this article; it may everything very neat and simplified; I always hear about prologues being a ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: "It would be great if there was a writing program that..."

    I wish there was a writing program that told you when your writing wasn't nearly as witty as you imagined in your head. You can always read it out loud ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Editing Tips Anyone?

    I've been struggling with this myself, and although all of these comments were helpful, I thought I'd add a question of my own. How do you go about editing huge ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    I agree with the kitten claws above me. I've read far too many great and poor books to mistake Stephenie Meyer as anything but a mediocre writer in the romance ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • NovMo Archives Re: Is Anyone Else Sad?

    I was in a huge funk after nanowrimo ended, which may have also been due too my leaving yws for a month to write the novel.... and during this december ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: In the mood for a review, per chance?

    Could I get a rain check on this? I'm going to edit my nanonovel and post it after its readable. It's about forty thousand words right now; it may be ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Three

    I thought this piece was excellent. I guess I'll start backwards, since the end is what's freshest in my mind... it always seems that women will give away their name ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Alone

    I sort of do, sort of don't agree with Karsten. You did use repetition a lot, and It is slightly over-the-top, but I can understand that, if you whittle this ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: You know you're a writer when...

    You know you're a writer when going for extended amounts of time without writing gives you anxiety and depression, and sitting down to your computer to type out a story ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: What would YOU do?

    Stop writing; maybe become a boxer. Or try for official title of empress of the universe. Because If I'm the greatest writer of all time, absolutely anything is within my ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: What would your characters do?

    Not sure I understand the statement (fata- fairy of the arts?) But Lilith, being musically challenged, would sleep with the judges and, depending on the size and abilities of the ...

    Dec 31, 2009


If you ever find yourself in the wrong story, leave.
— Mo Willems