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I would be happy to read your story in exchange for reading my first ever poem Full Moon Flapjacks it's other poetry... but only because I don't know the difference ...

Kat Train, it was nice of you to redo your review. :smt001 And I've had the same situation as yours, but in reverse. Someone gave me a disparaging comment on ...

I know you don't do any other kind of poetry but... It's my first poem and I didn't know where to place it, so I put it in other. Maybe ...

Your welcome my poor, sad friend. Check your yws mail.

I just read your last poem and I get the same feeling with that one as this: I feel like your telling me, not showing. Your narrating through words, but ...

Ignore the person above me, she is a noob, to be quite honest, and doesn't know how we do things here on yws. Our aim, to remind everyone, is too ...

First thing on my mind: I love your signature. I think I may steal it, when I get sick of mine. NITPICKS Adrian watched from his mind. He watched the ...

I have never heard someone use the phrase mothertounge-- its so charming, i do believe that's my new favorite word. If you haven't already guessed from these posts, we're very ...

Oh, Gone With the Wind. I just watched that; it was a christmas present. Clark Gable is a dream. But uh... I love moppy stories too, for the same reason ...

Hello Lykaios, I am also a returning member who lost my old password... but I'm glad I did, because I was a mean reviewer back then, and I got in ...

Cheer up AM!!! I haven't had that happen to me but I thought half my novel was lost... and of course, being me, I just shrugged. It was the bad ...

I clicked on this story thinking, "Ok. Another twilight romance in poor disguise-- it's fine. I can take it." But wow-- a deaf homosexual. I love, love, love it. :mrgreen: ...

My first poem, as you can probably tell from the uninspired title, and If you hate it, or you think I'm not cut out for poetry, or you think it ...

Oh god that was hilarious. Painfully hilarious. :smt005

This was used in a podcast I listen to as an example of an unreliable narrator; and how the writer masterfully portrays that, instead of having the duchess killed for ...