empressoftheuniverse

Welcome to yws! Nice to meet you, Hoodie girl. I agree with careless here. Jeans, a t-shirt normal appearance, but hurting inside, waiting for life to turn around; it doesn't ...

I kind of agree with Snoink here :? It sounds like a good idea but everyone and their half-brother has tried to publish essays about their day, memoirs on their ...

Like a lot of Poe's writing, this poem descends into madness and drags you along with. I am humming along with the happy tune of the bells until they are ...

I really liked this piece. It was brutal, but uplifting at the end. I personally don't think blood was ovverused. It didn't seem like too much to me. Blood that ...

It is a nice poem-- though Emily Dickinson rhymed soul with all, and I despise half-rhymes. Not to be a know-it-all, but it's called Hope is the thing with feathers. ...

you practice piano, each note rising disturbed from the gut of the instrument like birds from the underbrush. your body weaves, concentrated, your chest flat and breastless in that dress. ...

I've read this maybe three or four times but, as it's wonderful, I didn't know what to say. And I hate to be the person who posts four-word comments like ...

I agree with the person above-- kind of short; and if you do expand this into a story, I'll be interested to hear what happens. I'm a suker for makeover ...

hmm. Seventh was my least favorite. Eight was my favorite, both drivers ed ones were enjoyable. The first one was great as well. And it's cool that you tried out ...

I would love to write a novel with someone. I write anything, absoloutely anything, but experimental fiction is fascinating to me. If anyone's interested, pm me!

the sun cracking the earth like an interrogator. This didn't really work for me. I suppose an interrogator cracks questions at people, but so many other things crack or our ...

I've read this and two of your poems and this is what I have to say: your purpose on this earth is to torment us all with your beautiful work. ...

I'm not totally sure, but I'm thinking it might be better as "How much do you love me?" "Enough," he said. "to stay." "How long will you stay?" He stayed ...

Quotes are odd. As you can read from the signatures on this site, everyone has their own taste in what is essentially free wisdom. Whether you agree with the advice ...

I really enjoyed this. You do need a lot more punctuation sprinkled about in your piece; but I loved the idea and the content. They will hide their emotions of ...