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Hello Rebekah, I like the way your name is spelled :smt001 Very cool and unique. Ditto to the questions above, and also What is your favorite music? Color? Food? What ...

I like this part more than the last one. No grammar nitpicks as far as I can tell; and I like the way the story's paced; though I'm not quite ...

Hello death, You kind of skipped between punctuation and none; if you're not going to use any, that's fine. Just be consistent with your choice. What will it hurt its ...

I kind of agree with the person above me. Also, because I am a wholly conceited person, I never feel extreme guilt or unworthiness when receiving a gift from anyone. ...

Personally, I hate the twilight series. But agree with you on Kirsten's acting (is that her name?) she did a good job in Adventureland but she played an angsty, moody ...

I too thought the razor blades slightly absurd, but they were hilarious as well, and I wouldn't get rid of them except for the fact that they'd be obvious to ...

Thank you Becki. And in response to Tuna; I know exactly what you mean. It's "us" versus "them," adults suk kidz rule, and all that. If I ever finish this ...

I love how you incorporated a story into this piece. Smoke drapes and curls in the cat eyed sky That was exceptional; a really great beginning that got me hooked. ...

It's true tigress... recess has the perfect chocolate-to-peanut butter ratio. Other peanut butter-chocolate candies just aren't the same. we have almost all the same jobs that we want. I want ...

God that was beautiful. The first two lines punched me in the face; and the poem got progressively better as it moved along. Brava. A few nitty-nitpicks. Leaving the profound ...

The ending was a little confusing to me; you begged him and then hung up on him and smiled because his lies will no longer affect you? I didn't really ...

Voted, and happy to see badges are winning :D

Thank you Tenyo, Pages and Redbird. I'm glad you guys liked it... and all suggestions have been utilized. Everyone was super helpful. :smt001 Currently working on my second poem, since ...

I agree with person above me. The first stanza seems to contradict the rest of the poem. In the beginning you ask him how he can be so happy; at ...

Another wonderful poem by you, Kryollac. :smt001 I’ve never fallen for your tricks; Your machinations, I’ve always seen through; For when it comes to using folk, I’m far better at ...