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I could see this as a first stanza, where you then elaborate on what they could have been and come to a full-circle ending with this also as the last ...

This poem is really something. Thank you for relaxing my poor bloodshot eyes with a calm, relaxing piece of poetry. This is most definitely lyrical. It said: Watch the open ...

You have a lot of superfluous words that are a little hard to slog through Thus now they are the masters of the earth, They look upon other creatures with ...

*is confused by the veiled conversations listed above* umm... I'm here to review? He smiles when she smiles, he cries when she cries. I would say nix this line, because ...

I wrote this review but, by mysterious machinations of yws, It was deleted, or something. Anyways, I agree with Matt about the second person thing-- though you seem to mean ...

Being busy, Nature is. Withdrawn from the lethargy Of frigid months. everyone pointed this out but I thought I'd suggest a way to fix it. Being busy, nature has withdrawn ...

Hey caged heart, I have been reviewing poetry (almost) all day (have not taken a shower and its midnight) and I have to say of the ubergillion poems I've read, ...

What is tomorrow without your love? Some wounds that would not heal Ripped off body in 2 halves Unable any more to feel. 2 halves is lazy (sorry but its ...

Hello lilymoore, First I have to say that I love your signature and your avatar. Emilie Autumn is amazing beyond words :smt001 I have to say that I really loved ...

A single tear, for a single lover, rolls down her pretty face. It's been a year, but he said forever, yet forever has come in vain. I really didn't like ...

Hello Corwin. Nice to see you on yws. This poem feels a lot like lyrics. This was the chorus: I can see it rain I can feel it pour I ...

Hello Ash, I am also a beginner at writing poetry. I have yet to write a romantic poem, though. They just don't suit my writing taste. But anyways,[ quote="Red Ashes"]“Where ...

I agree completely with Juniper but... that's a huge can of worms, romantic poetry. Anyways... I agree with Juniper and Sunny; I would also note The dark of the night ...

I must say, you have a great rhyming scheme here. A dream is just that Unless you make it out to be True. Real In your own reality O.o That ...

I like it. Short, sweet, conveying emotion. One little nitpick. Nix the ellipsis after violent and have Josh be a statement with a period. like so Violent, Josh . Kind, ...