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I also like the idea from running off the highway of life; though I don't like the last bit about the friend referred to as you. As I see this ...

I also liked the way it spelled out a name, but I'm a sucker for that vertical-line poetry (has a specific name but I've forgotten) It is a beautiful birthday ...

I loved this piece. I loved the It is a heavenly sin. maybe this should be stuffed with heavanly sin. Because it feels a little strange right now. Besides that, ...

Okay, here we go. But you’re not here, and you’re not there. I think the but can be removed from the sentence, because the last line started with Yet and ...

I agree about everyone above; it seems like a laundry list of things that you wish you get done, and it feels scattered. I would say pick one or two ...

Sorry this is late. Hope your meeting went well. An angel perhaps, Here to save me from the deep crevice that is my abode? I think the line after this, ...

Ls like crying to others this should be is. I liked the imagery in this, very vivid and compelling. Because your a dream I never had This line is too ...

Your rhyme scheme is flawless and complex, without feeling forced. Brava. Second in my greatest flaws Is my defense's tearing claws. Sharper than serraated saws. A lack of grace when ...

your welcome, Mr. Knightly. It's a wonderful piece of work, though I usually hate personifying nature, it was charming in this poem. PS you inspired my new avatar :smt001

besides march being capitalized, I really liked this poem. It was very tell-y, but I found it oddly fitting. It felt like the descent of a teenager. And the staircase ...

It took a second to get the last line. But i realized they welcomed each other while thinking naught of each other... nice. I like it, and I agree a ...

from the endings of the poem, it seems to have a pretty good rhyme scheme. It's kind of odd hoe you wrote a poem in a different language about writing ...

trapping a man within their depths to forever have hi heart captivated by their depths I don't like the repetition here. Besides that and the typoes in this piece, it ...

That was a nice poem; quirky and bouncy. It reminded me of lyrics by Owl City or Never Shout Never-- but better because I don't like them all that much. ...

The goal, i think we can all agree (maybe?) is to be positive, while constructive. I am guilty of what was being said above; more so in poetry than fiction-- ...