empressoftheuniverse

Hello, I'm Empress and I'm here to review. Things I will review Poetry, any kind (including lyrics) Short Stories (Horror and Romance are probably my favorite, but any genre.) Bits ...

I wasn't going to comment on this because I know nothing about Tony Blair and I hate to critique something that I know nothing about but I just wanted to ...

Making them pool up and over take my mind overtake, but I think take over would be better But your caught up in emotions your-you're You've let her hold, your ...

The last handful of sentences were so magnificent that by the end, I was completely in love. The beginning was a little slow, however, and I had some trouble staying ...

Prologue Lightning struck the west wind fire and I could not tame myself enough to step out into it. I watched the building where my former home had once lay? ...

I tried to review this before but my computer decided to vomit on everything I love and delete my comment. However, I agree with Twit completely. Your main character needs ...

Hello Gracy, thanks for the follow. Mostly I agree with Blink-- I think that you need to dig a little deeper in regards to emotion and try to bring some ...

You are a prolific poet. Unless you just have about nine hundred poems lying around in your computer; it just boggles my mind how you can write quality rhyming poetry ...

Instead of just a boring old review I'm going to give some of these characters faces. The devil, of course: Not in all white but since it's Clive Owens I ...

So I did actually man up and read your story, at least the first part. First of all, let me say that I love satire. I love when people are ...

When your computer deletes everything you just typed.... eternal pain. But it's all ok because I just read this lovely poem while listening to Johnny Cash and the two went ...

Hello, I feel like this poem is a little schizophrenic. I love what you're doing with the metaphors but if you kept it with one theme, either biblical or Greek-themed, ...

It stands, merely a shadow, a shell, Of the legend it once was I think these two lines would be omitted. But so you don't just think I'm bossing you, ...

My computer keeps having seizures I have literally reviewed this like eight times I am spitting anger right now. Ugh let me try again To bad mouth this place or ...

I really like this poem, it it really true to your emotions without being overly personal. The first part was beautiful, simple and true. It doesn't start getting cliched until ...