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as she begged through song, cried "why?" this line is a little long. Try as she begged through song, "why?" that's only one letter less, but it feels a lot ...

to person above^ Those lines started with conjunctions ;) lolz. But I don't find that a grammatical or stylistic error. We fight ourselves to fight nature. Diversity must be gone, ...

Hello, I cannot think of what to write My poetry fills the endless pages of my mindless, self-absorbed, dribble And it shows its utter boredom to the poetic mind It ...

Hello, Obviously I loved your poem. One nitpick: the widowed windmill creaks and paddles behind him in the stillness. the mushrooms turn up like fingerless thimbles. I think these two ...

Hello phantom, I thought this piece was beautiful; the topic was a little overused but the language in which you described it was beautiful. Kudos also for having the main ...

finished, pink angel. And ben-- I'm on it.

NitPIcks Stay safe me beloveds "Stay safe, my beloveds." Weren’t reunions supposed to be sweet. Weren't reunions supposed to be sweet ? That's all I saw. Overall I really liked ...

yes. Good night senor.

Drama, sci-fi, action, fantasy and occasionally indie. I HATE romantic comedies, usually. What kind of movies do you hate?

I didn't know that was your dream-- but i think math is somewhat applicable if you ever have to do landscaping, architecture, funds-- you know, that stuff. What kind of ...

because I wish i liked geometry or biology, but the people who sit next to me ruin it for me. why do you hate math?

right now, choir. :( MY english teacher also rubs me in all the wrong ways. What is your least favorite subject?

reading, thinking, revelling in my solitude. who is your current least favorite teacher?

Because you can sleep in tomorrow (?) EDIT: midnight. I meant what, besides sleep should you be doing right no?

Because scientists don't want them to. It's some sort of conspiracy, I imagine. What should you be doing intead of this (and sleep)?