emotionally(un)stable

You do create some interesting images here, but I think you could work on uncovering some stronger diction and more originality in expressing thoughts on love. Ok, I like totally ...

I've been bent So far that I'm broken. Your whispering fingertips Tend to dance along painted lips, But mine were so chapped, And you were so scared. You thought I ...

Strangling in white sheets I think that by making the sheets white you're symbolizing innocence, which gives the speaker a personality, and you feel for him or her.That line was ...

I really like the imagery this creats, but also how vague it is. I guess you had a specific message in mid when you wrote it, but it could mean ...

This was really well written and relatable. It seemed like you were talking to the reader instead of just writing the poem. The only thing is maybe add some more ...

I have the power to open it, but in opening that door, another will close, and if that door closes, I will lose the ones behind it. I like the ...

I spread out my arms, and I offer him my heart. I promise to devote my life, to doing the things he can’t. I’ll never say he failed, that would ...

When you said it was a sappy poem i was like ohh great but after I read it, it really ddin't seem to be that way at all. It seemed ...

Hi my laptops about to die and I lost the charger so this should be quick and painless. Might take out the repitition. The lines are weird lengths too i ...

Oh my, It's a poem! Its a good poem! There's lots of emotions in it. I wuv the rhyme scheme! Hehe it almost seems kind of evil with the whole ...

Maybe I was stupid for leaving myself alone, but maybe no one really gave me the choice. Whatever happened, wherever I went wrong being alone, isolated from the world seemed ...

Dig a dark whole in your life, big enough to let mistakes flow in, wrong decisions keep you up, fear of consequences keeps you out. So you lay awake, pretending ...

I see the message you are trying to show here as I think we all do but it's very strong becayse you are lacking imagry I think if you had ...

I thought this poem was very well thought out and portrayed the depth of death without being too sad. But there are a lot of grammer issues with it. I ...

Dancing in eternity, drowning in serenity, falling into open minded dreams. Sunless days, moonless nights, breaking dawn with frightened screams. Hours pass but only seconds, times is frozen yet speed