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i really liked the metaphors you had in this. the connections of poetry and the real world made a lot of sense after thinking about it. i liked the surreal ...

hey dan! yea i'm not really a professional at photos and i've never taken any classes or anything... but yea. i love taking pictures and i wanted to comment on ...

nice pictures liz! they're not bad for amateur photos. i like the fog one a lot. the sunset one would probably have been better if you had wider lens (which ...

wow. rosethorn, seriously... are you a model? hehe nice muse. you always have the most interesting pictures. =) aww matt and her sweetie.. how cute! =) shriek you're so adorable. ...

dogs > kittens but that's okay waffles... you can take cool jumping up pictures. what a pretty birthday girl! but you know what emma? i'm older than you. hah. claudette- ...

hello there. all right. even if you're trying to rhyme, like Snoink said, you shouldn't let the flow of it be disturbed. the way you made the poem rhyme forced ...

hey there! haha i liked the last entry of your intro. i don't know why, but it made me smile... heh... your story seemed kinda clunky in transition. things went ...

Envious thief, he bleeds his cries, for, ever after, his echoes reverberate in our walls. Our affection's sealed with embraces, yet implicit love falls short of grateful reception. Razor blades ...

haha pogs. i never knew what they were called until recently... and i'm surprised no one mentioned this... pokemon? unless i was the only one obsessed with that... =)

all right. most of us grew up around the 90's (whether born in early 90's or had childhood-teenage years in that time). and i know this has been done a ...

i felt the emotion, but it kind of seemed like you were rambling or venting. try to not pull in all different topics (all different reasons you are mad?) at ...

having confusing phrases doesn't really make it deep. the last chunk of it especially was kind of hard to grasp. try not to base a whole poem around one line. ...

it's not exactly something i would call in-depth and personal... seems much more like one of those poems you see on a poster. the first thing i have to say ...

hey there! welcome to yws. it seems like a good idea for a poem, but it's written in a prose-like way. for the bulk and idea of the poem, it ...

My haircut... which has now grown out and become horrible again... oh well. That one day after I left the salon it was actually in a state I liked...