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Interesting.. first you say you can't describe yourself, then you go away for 10 days and come back with 100 facts of yourself.. interesting..

hell fire

The rhyme was forced at some parts. This line was a bit weird: "Love grows old with time and sand," Time and sand? I know it was meant to be ...

Maybe I'm just really tired right now, maybe I'm just stupid. I didn't really get it. Each line had good description but they didn't seem to connect. Once you personally ...

say a little prayer, to that person there. it all builds up, we're gonna die tonight. say a little prayer, 'cause it's all gonna crash when this angel heads toward ...

Wait, that means I don't like anime too much right? Well, I think it means that so... Don't post here unless you are drinking some beverage at the moment.

I hate people like you... You always write such good poems...

I didn't get: "There won't be some people that people won't see." What does that mean? It was really confusing me. I really liked the last two lines though.

It seems like the beginning of some witch chant in a little kids' story...

It... was... angry...

It was allright. It's better than a lot of the rap nowadays, anyway. The lyrics were good. I'm not a huge fan of rap, but this was okay. It's spelled ...

Lately, I've been feeling empty. Like I lost my feelings. I have laughed, felt upset, but it wasn't really deep. It was spontaneous and disappeared after awhile. I don't know. ...

It wasn't**

It was okay. It was fabulously awesome, but it was allright.

I don't like how you just said "there is one doll" and "there is another doll" and then you directly stated what they stood for. You need to be more ...