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I really liked this. It really put an image into my head. I can imagine the stage even though you never literally described it. I agree with ohhewwo, though, on ...

Pigeons always run away when I go near them, just like most people do when I meet them... hmm... I wonder why... Just wondering, but do Dargquon Ql'deleodna and ohhewwo ...

Heh okay maybe I exaggerated when I said I guessed what it meant, because I can read a some Mandarin. But anyway, here's my handwriting.

This seemed softer than your other stuff, not that it was bad. It was really good. The really long last line... is that a trademark style or something of yours? ...

Heh. I know they are Chinese characters, and I took a stab at the meaning (see above). Am I right though? I am curious :)

Hehe. That says "Hello! I am (your name). I love my boyfriend", right? I love the doodles... nice!

Yeah... can't give much critique... Really nice job, as usual.

lol I feel so bad now. The first song that I learned was a simple folk song in a different language. There were three different chords!! The first recent song ...

This reminded me of another poem on here... it had to do with a death parade too... "I grab the bottle and seep into the land of drunkenness" The rest ...

attempt to appear older by cussing and speaking of "mature" things glitter and all that shit in the air and love, with dizzy giggles and intense make out sessions followed ...

For "Wind," I don't think you should put "wind" again in the stanza, since you are describing it. It is like explaining what a words mean and using the word ...

I hope you're not tired of hearing this, but it was really good. I especially liked the hide and seek analogy. The part that confused me was the part where, ...

I guess this sort of goes back to aliens and whatnot... Do you think we humans are the center of the universe? That we are the only ones here? Do ...

I personally find it very low to have plastic surgery unless, as mentioned before, it was to make a severe hospital patient look as normal as possible. Still, it's the ...

It was okay except for this part: "It really made me sad I blamed it all on you not me I acted really bad " The "sad" and "bad" rhyme ...