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Isn't generalizing all Americans as being ignorant and selfish and all that great stuff like Americans generalizing other people of other countries? Although Americans being ignorant does tend to show

Interesting. It's a new perspective (for me, anyway). "I kept my hands folded in front of me; in what I admit was an attempt to stop them from fidgeting. " ...

This was kind of long, so I skimmed over some parts of it. I like how you kept bringing up certain points in the poem, but some of them kind ...

There isn't much to say... in case you want to hear it again... good job.

Haha nice, Snoink!

I didn't particularly like the rhyming. The rhyming made the poem fast, and I don't think this poem needs to be fast. If you don't want to change the rhyming, ...

There were a few spelling errors, but the poem itself was kind of... tranquil? It was a nice read.

flood, selfish thoughts and wishes, just a flash of name gives desire. attach perverted thoughts for such a small infatuation. more a daydream wish, too impossible to pursue. ah, but ...

snoink- A really good critic, has interesting stories, has numerous websites, probably the person I have known the longest on here. griffinkeeper- Snoink's twin :) shadow knight- What can I ...

I really liked it, especially the last line. The only thing that sort of bugged me was: "You wonder where that summer went. " I don't know. It seemed kind ...

Your grammar was on and off throughout the whole thing and you had some typos. "I would seize to exsist" I believe you mean "I would cease to exist ." ...

Those are really realistic. I like the "Everlasting Umbilical" one. The baby's so cute!

Emma is a really nice person who has awesome hair! Fontroy has a cool avatar.

"As im sure you've heared by now... you're considered almost to the end of your rope. " Maybe you should just take out this whole part. It was a bit ...

"Wait... so if I don't read the e-mail, something bad will happen, and if I don't send it, I will die? Why would it matter if the bad thing happened, ...