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I didn't really like the way the lines were broken up. It made the poem kind of choppy. The poem itself was okay, but the flow definitely needs some work.

Wow. The two poems are like laced together... yeah... I liked the way you wrote this, especially the first half of it. I think you used root "comrad" too much. ...

^ has a kingdom...

^ is good at writing stories, especially the endings.

Maybe the guys should post some pictures of themselves, to prove it ;)

Universe Sweatpants or jeans?

Congratulations. Of course, I have to ask this... did you win anything?

^ is very accepting to other people

It seemed like you just wanted to let your feelings go. This was evidently a release. It was really "I feel really bad right now and nobody cares and I ...

That's not that bad. I know some people who have/are going to graduate and go to college while they are 17.

Like your poems...wow... Really awesome.

"so if you are wondering how much i love you " Maybe you could just have "if you are wondering how much i love you." Nice. Sorry, I can't find ...

"Him and I have had this conversation " Shouldn't it be "he and I"? Or am I missing some big point you're trying to make there? I liked it, but ...

It depends on the girl... some are desperate, some don't really care, some are clingy, some are independent... which basically means that every girl is different and there's a different ...

It's a good concept. There's not really anything I would change about it, except, next time, could you not capitalize all your letters in your title? It really didn't seem ...