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The last stanza seemed conflicting, like you weren't sure whether you are trying to talk about him doing everything for you, or you returning the favor. If you arrange it ...

I hate people who complain about being skinny. It annoys me to hell...

Admit it, Emma, you know you're pretty. And if you don't want to look like you, we can switch... :) Muse, you do look sort of different, but I can ...

Very nicely written. A simple enough transaction, but it was described with so much detail and emotion.

^ is having a conversation with the person above him...

haha Nice start.

The sentences were kind of weird. You would say something in one sentence, then you would restate a main point in the sentence before in the next sentence. Does that ...

That was interesting. The scene with the house was described very well. I hope you let us read more of it.

That was really cool. Some of them were kind of random, but I like all of them.

Welcome back!

It's not the Barbies, it's society in general. It's the look on and definition of perfection. It's those people telling you that beauty is on the inside but also on ...

It confused me a bit, but I liked the words and imagery you used. The poem was so pretty, even though I was confused.

^ has AIM, YIM and MSN... yay YoshiArmada!!

^ has an awesome namer herself. Writers rock!!

That was great. You really captured all the "little" things, which made it very realistic.