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I loved it... but the last stanza didn't seem to be as awesome as the rest of it. And, for the sake of specific compliments... because you know I love ...

It seemed a little unrealistic and blunt. I know it's fantasy fiction, but the realistic parts didn't seem very... real. There were some grammatical/spelling errors, like Kay Kay said. To ...

Ahhh... so many different metaphors... But they're so nice...

I have a feeling it's one of those poems you take from something that happened and you drape it with fancy words... but you still leave enough so we sort ...

If I listen, can I now my future? know my future There were some parts where I noticed the same words repeated. Though it wasn't really a huge deal, it ...

What a pradox Just a typo [I think]. paradox It was pretty light and had a good rhythm with its tone. The questions kind of bothered me... like a little ...

This was a bit dull... but the flip was pretty creative, especially with the line in between [which I didn't even get until the second time I read it... heh].

I'm surprised by the tone of this... this isn't just a rain shower... It's a hurricane. So many people lost homes... some people they knew... I don't know anyone there ...

Wow... amazing phrases... I can't really see past it, but I like it.

Happy 15th Birthday! Yay! Sponson is 15! And.. well.. where's the link? :?

Well... I think it's spelled yesterday ... sometime I wish you could just say what you wanted to say I wish I could do what my fantasies potraid There is ...

Grammar time! Right... so you have some grammar errors/things that just bothered me. "It is almost time for.....The end. Only three dots are needed, but this is just one of ...

I know I sleep To my home on high I think this should be changed to: To my home up high , but that's just my thoughts. It was pretty ...

Some commas that were put in made the read a bit difficult [because I would stop, but it was really meant to be read on]. A little choppy, but not ...

Yes, because it's called perception. Am I right? Am I right!? And, for lack of feedback, I end with that.