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Okay. Thanks for the comments.

I find it amusing how all the guys won't admit that they are hot... heh... Not that I'm saying anything... 8-[ [Ooh I didn't know this emoticon existed..] Snoink, what ...

Heh, I have no clue... The closest thing to an analysis that I can get is something that turned out wrong and what might have happened if things went differently. ...

This seemed horribly cliche... especially these lines: Slit My wrists Slowly the pain is my one true love watch me bleed The outline of my body on the hardwood floor ...

Thanks for the suggestions and comments. I'd like to know... Is the fourth stanza out of place? Really would like some more feedback to this. Thanks in advance.

I think neither is... because both have terrible generalizations. Not all rappers are black and not all hardcore rockers are white.

you want something from me and that something is something that I lack You do use 'something' a lot in here, but I think you should just add after 'me.' ...

I liked it, but I didn't really start to like it until this line: spring petals suffocate in the winter mist. The beginning seems all right, but didn't really catch ...

I saw you didn't have any comments on this, so even though it was awhile ago... the brim hat you wear This line... I don't know why, but I didn't ...

you have to be worse to get better but waiting sometimes is a long time. and sometimes, all you feel is the cold when you wake up in the morning. ...

"I can imagine how annoying it would be to be mistaken for Americans, but the truth is that you can't blame people for it." I think you just have to ...

I know, I'm just saying... to all the people who hate bands because they got popular... get over it. You're not the only one listening to music.

Kind of off-topic but, two things... There are some awesome bands with girls in them. [In my opinion, anyway. You might not agree with me...] Smashing Pumpkins [girl bassist], Tsunamibomb, ...

Ah. Didn't know about the Google one. Oh well :) I wonder who the O island guy is? Hmm... Actually... now that I look at it, there's only allowance for ...

Well, I don't know if I'm allowed to have official things made for YWS, but I thought that a GuestMap was really cool and though that it would be cool ...