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Not much help, but I thought it was good...

The poem revolved around a theme that we all naturally feel and had common words to match. After reading, I didn't really feel like I read something more than words. ...

It was pretty well-written, but I agree with Aviator about a little more of the reason for the aliens' attack. Is there more to it or is this it? If ...

heh I liked it. I like those clever metaphors and fancy words. Nice job :D

This story felt much more like the conclusion of a story rather than the story itself. I couldn't really relate to the characters because they are freshly introduced and their ...

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If they wanted to debate, they could always join the group. Nate, is it possible to do that 'show the usergroup's forum' thing like you did with Pawprints? I think ...

Is this a song you made, or one you found funny? If it's the latter, then it's not allowed here.

Thanks for the comments guys. I really appreciate it.

The nose in the mirror is similar to yours. I had a problem with this line. The wording is just a little bit awkward. This poem was pretty good. At ...

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fore earthly pleas and pleasures Just a typo. 'For,' I'm guessing. Chevy, you should really let us listen to some of your songs [if possible]! The lyrics are really interesting ...

Haha. That was pretty cool. You had a tendency to add a bit too much to your sentences, such as: I woke up with a start and was astonished to ...

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Heh... Thanks. I thought if I used second person it would 'scare' the reader a little more. Did it work? :?