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butterflies are hard to capture. these were all really pretty butterflies! keep in mind your subject. try not to have too many distracting things in the way of your photo ...

haha yeah crysi, you look pretty!... but like a helluva mad cop in the second one xD aww fand you're adorable =) your boys are pretty fly ;) liz you ...

wow that is such a horrible position to be in... you're so strong to have gotten through all that. and still be so driven and positive about it. i'm glad ...

There are many others, 35 to be exact, and while I would like to introduce them all to you, I have not the time. Some others of note include: Juan, ...

hey, thanks for all the crits guys. =) claudette and fand, you're right about that part with the sugar and dashes. now that i'm re-reading it, it seems awkward. xantham, ...

hahah i like it. i like the allusions you made to all their respective music genres. it kind of reminds me of american pie by don mclean. nice work =)

there's something about this... admittedly, it's not the best thing ever. but there is something about it... a sort of cute to it. the beat... i love the beat to ...

i like the flow of this. reading this, i could hear an acoustic guitar being played to it. something i would say though, is the tense of your poem. maybe ...

Draw in deep the summer, late night. The artificial sweet of tobacco- sugar faintly hits your tongue- grinds its body on the walls of your cheeks. Parting lips, it's too ...

this is sort of random, but i remember what i was trying to say last time. this reminds me a lot of the book catcher in the rye , and ...

i have read 9 1/2 of these... i read all the lord of the rings book until the second half of the third book (technically the fifth). heh i feel ...

just because you don't know names of people does not make people heartless. yes, we are still sad. we don't need to know the name of a person to be ...

ahh! i didn't even notice this? how could i not notice this? well... i really, really liked this. yeah, it changed from topic to topic, but that's part of why ...

hmm... you lost me for what you are trying to say. whenever i read your poetry, i feel as if i nearly understand, yet i lose it all by the ...

writing poetry is difficult. poetry is more than face value words. it goes deeper than saying "i love you, do you love me?" i'm not saying i'm an expert at ...