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It was a pretty good story, but you really need to spell check.

Heh I liked it, you're lucky, I can write nothing but cheesy. I'm not much of a critiquer (?) but I thought it was cool. (Ick word.) I have a ...

I changed our main characters name from Jasper Wallace to... duh duh duhhh... Carolina Waller. Yee haw! I closed my eyes, silently begging to wake up from the nightmare I ...

Can Opener aDur! I have one of those oneTouch can openers. It can be snuggled without fear of fatal injury :D SPEW is a kitten eating super power that must ...

Ok, thanks for the suggestions. Actually Jasper is a girl, it was my friends dog's names, and I couldn't think of anything else. But anyway, yeah, thanks! I'm typing this ...

*tucks her can opener into bed, kissing it softly* Goodnight can opener, I loooove you! Heheh sorry... I love utensils.

I liked this, it was cool. That is pretty much all I have to say, since I can't critique... or whatever. Who cares what I have to say anyway? Heheh ...

I slipped into Lake Kilter, a heart stopping chill going through me. I jolted a bit, my muscles stiffened, but I kept going further into the icy water. Slowly, I ...

Ick. Hmmm... into the trashbin you go dear. Ok. New idea. muahahaha.

GhkFpd out of 10 I can't really understand it... so I can't really rate it.

I liked it. (Hmm. That's all I got for critigueish type things.) Oh yeah, I think I'm gonna go buy some power ranger's shoes and have my mom make me ...

That was nice I'm not very good at critiquing (or however it is spelled spelt... i dunno) You don't get much snow in oregon do you? Mostly rain. I live ...

Just noticed the typos.... give me a break, I'm too tired to fix them. Chapter 1 "Hey freeloader," I say, running towards the couch where my twenty-one-year-old sister Meygan was ...

Hmmm... sounds cool. I'll definitely join

Wow, that was really nice. I always try to write something about nature... but I always end up writing a novelette for teens... lol Your really good for your age. ...