emmylove

Hey :) I'm back! Nitpicks: The first sentence is really good, except for the word "nervously." It's a label word, so maybe you should try to "show, don't tell." I'm ...

SQUEEEEEE!! Oh gosh. I love Harvest Moon. And MFoMT was my favorite :D I don't have many nitpicks, except twice you spelled Kai's name like "Kia." That's a car brand, ...

Since it's so short, I think I'll quote the whole thing and do corrections in green. Try not to be intimidated, I'm pretty wordy. They always said that they would ...

This was absolutely magical. I might come back and read it again in a couple hours so I can start off the new year with a smile and some witty ...

@ everyone confused I meant it the other way around! My bad...

I absolutely love this! :D But one nitpick: I do know of another website that does this, but it's based in the USA rather than in Europe. I used to ...

Haha, I love Harry Potter ♥ I think I'll do this one in purple. So, first I have to say, her name is Lilly Evan s , so you can't ...

I'm working on the 100 themes challenge, but I'm doing it for my own fiction piece rather than a fanfiction. The only reason I'm posting this one is because I ...

1293493847508934631249873/10 for the Poke'mon and (correct me if I'm wrong) Harvest Moon references, plus the all around Christmas-y nature

3/10 sorry, not a huge fan

10/10 only because I wrote something almost identical in a paragraph once :)

The only thing you said that I agree is awesome was algebra, which is really sad (I'm taking algebra 2). I haven't ever read the Maximum Ride series, but I'm ...

I WANT A REVIEW! I WANT A REVIEW! :D

At the very beginning, you say that Salvador licks Finn's face, but since I didn't know Salvador was a dog, it creeped me out. I know that you showed (not ...

"Is there someone else up there we can talk to?" - Monty Python and the Holy Grail