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Re: Harvest Moon-Not That Great with Words
Hey :) I'm back! Nitpicks: The first sentence is really good, except for the word "nervously." It's a label word, so maybe you should try to "show, don't tell." I'm ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Harvest Moon-Home
SQUEEEEEE!! Oh gosh. I love Harvest Moon. And MFoMT was my favorite :D I don't have many nitpicks, except twice you spelled Kai's name like "Kia." That's a car brand, ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Snatched
Since it's so short, I think I'll quote the whole thing and do corrections in green. Try not to be intimidated, I'm pretty wordy. They always said that they would ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: How to be Awkward
This was absolutely magical. I might come back and read it again in a couple hours so I can start off the new year with a smile and some witty ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: 5 Reasons Why YWS Is Better Than Every Other Website
@ everyone confused I meant it the other way around! My bad...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: 5 Reasons Why YWS Is Better Than Every Other Website
I absolutely love this! :D But one nitpick: I do know of another website that does this, but it's based in the USA rather than in Europe. I used to ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Lilly Evans; diary 8
Haha, I love Harry Potter ♥ I think I'll do this one in purple. So, first I have to say, her name is Lilly Evan s , so you can't ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: XIII. Misfortune
I'm working on the 100 themes challenge, but I'm doing it for my own fiction piece rather than a fanfiction. The only reason I'm posting this one is because I ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
1293493847508934631249873/10 for the Poke'mon and (correct me if I'm wrong) Harvest Moon references, plus the all around Christmas-y nature
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
3/10 sorry, not a huge fan
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
10/10 only because I wrote something almost identical in a paragraph once :)
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Hi! All about me...sort of.
The only thing you said that I agree is awesome was algebra, which is really sad (I'm taking algebra 2). I haven't ever read the Maximum Ride series, but I'm ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Who wants a Review?
I WANT A REVIEW! I WANT A REVIEW! :D
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Rust and Stardust - Chapter One
At the very beginning, you say that Salvador licks Finn's face, but since I didn't know Salvador was a dog, it creeped me out. I know that you showed (not ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Movie Quotes
"Is there someone else up there we can talk to?" - Monty Python and the Holy Grail
Nov 27, 2010