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Re: Claire and Gray - Black
For those of you who don't know about Harvest Moon, the bachelors/bachelorettes go through "heart events." I was going to write a short story for each heart color, even though ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Serenity [Main Character For Novel]
So, I don't really know much about reviewing sketches, but I love to draw, so I'll give my opinion. I love the way the hair is flowing down towards her ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
It'd be really appreciated :D
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one of Novel one
Hey there :) I have some nitpicks in the spoiler, if you'd like to read them. I didn't bother with punctuation errors. "So what are we hunting brother?” An angelic ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Title Irrelevent Because the Story is Being Rewritten (ch1)
Actually, TabbyGirl, you were right. They're going to an academy, and they're freshmen in high school. But I was trying to give it somewhat more of a college feel. Maybe ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Title Irrelevent Because the Story is Being Rewritten (ch1)
If you've already read the other chapter of this, please note that this is now chapter one, and that one has been changed to chapter two... please also note that ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Darkness In London [Chapter 1, Edited]
Hello :) Emmylove here and ready to review. I didn't feel like being too nitpicky, so there won't be many. First off, you title this as Chapter 1, so I ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: What's the worst movie you've ever seen?
HEY! Avatar with blue peoples may have stolen a plot line, but it's not the most horrible movie ever! I love the graphics and whatnot. Another bad movie: Year One.
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: (third edit) Power of Pop Secret- Erik's View- Part 1
Hello there :) By request, here is your review, complete with nitpicks and such. Anna Trueman sat awkwardly beside me outside Room 239, quietly sobbing. I'm not a huge fan ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: The Haunting Hour (Isabelles Story)
Hello, it's me... by request :) Other than in your spoiler, I caught no spelling errors and only one grammar error. They varied in shape, some were skinny and lanky ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
I'm socially awkward; My initials spell ELM (but my middle name is NOT Love - yes, my username is quite misleading); I play clarinet really well (ahem, section leader); I ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: What's the worst movie you've ever seen?
Police Academy: Mission to Moscow I do believe I just beat that :wink:
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: The end of Oz
'Eyyyyyyy, it's me :) Sorry it's a bit long, I'm feeling rather nitpicky. I'm ashamed to say that I'm not familiar with the story of the Wizard of Oz (never ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Lightheart - Chapter 1 - Part 1 (Edited)
I actually have quite a few nitpicks, but overall this is quite good. Sorry it's so long, I'll change the colors to make it interesting. ~I liked how in the ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Thank you, sir, may I have another (REVIEW)?
Oh hey there. I see you've stumbled upon my review thread. I will review any and all fiction, but no poetry. I just don't know how poetry works. My reviews ...
Jan 2, 2011
