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Hey there, Doxie! I'm here to review :) First off, this whole story sounds a lot like a blog entry, especially because of the parenthases. You really shouldn't have those ...

I finally got around to reviewing! I'm not going to nitpick, though, because all my nitpicks had to do with word choice, things like "You could use a better word ...

Hey Purple! :) I'm only reviewing this because I feel strongly about the subject. Otherwise, I am currently working on a persuasive essay and probably shouldn't be on the Interwebs ...

@Idraax: This would involve us running up hills, and I have a bad knee (well, they're both bad, but one is worse than the other), so it would be just ...

Since no one else wanted to be nitpicky, I'll do it :P "You can't prove it doesn't exist!" T(lowercase) he nerdy boy insisted, pouting and crossing his arms. (Do you ...

Hey there :) So... the others basically got all the grammar and spelling stuff, so I'll just make comments on content and stuff. The first paragraph is okay as it ...

Hills ~ They give me the chills. I've got to take some pills, 'cause now my knee kills. Oh, the thrills of hills.

Yellow Heart Claire knew Gray was buzzed. She was sober, but she had an unusual feeling in her gut that prolonged her optimism; that’s why she didn’t suggest leaving after ...

Hello :) I'm here to nitpick and stuff. Spelling/grammar corrections in orange. First off, a tip for posting to YWS: try to seperate all your paragraphs with spaces in between. ...

I think it's a bit fluffy. Please help me shave it! Note: I couldn't resist the hat cliche. Green Heart With a smile on her face and a bottle in ...

Hey :) I apologize for the delay, but I promised you a review, so here it is! I’m not the biggest dragon out there, I’ll admit, but I do have ...

Honestly, this part would still make complete sense if you didn't read the first part of the Blue Heart. But you'd be missing a little bit of the story, so ...

So, this is part one of the blue heart event, and part two is in the makings right now. It will probably be up either tomorrow or the next day! ...

Purple Heart A chubby Mayor Thomas lied shirtless on a ducky-patterned towel while gargling some cheap beer; bare feet snuggling the warm sand, Claire drew a deep breath and decided ...

Two wandering souls Similar but seperate Without marching band It's a haiku I wrote about me and my friend, and how tragic our lives would be if we had never ...