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emmylou1995

  • Writing Activities Re: In The Picture

    Hoss would take his...um, he has no friends so he would take take his school psychologist, Ms.Sophie, to help him not go crazy on the journey. Scenario- Your character just ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: What would your characters do?

    "I, personally, would tell them to shut up. Then I would walk to the ice cream parlor for some strwberry ice cream." - Hoss Parker If someone was about to ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Hello, my name is...

    Hello, my name is Elsie and I dont give a Damn.

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    Here goes: I waited and waited and waited and waited.

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: funny words

    Game, Eat, Fun :)

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: name association

    That doesnt sound like a name. I would say, if anything, a boy who is tough but is hiding something, tall, skinny, black hair? Germaine Park (Erma)

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    Um...I'll give this a 6.4. It doesnt explain enough for me. She is who? Wanted a day off from what? Little more description. Mine: People say that if there is ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you!

    Character

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game

    Reply: I stood outside my mini red cooper staring into the window. I could see my shiny keychain and cell phone through the glass. I sighed. Then, above my head ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: my first anime drawing in side position

    I like the girls hair the best. One, the color matches her well. Second, you made it flow very smoothly. It reminds me of a young girl i met once ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Lake District summer

    I love the colors in your picture. The colors of the surroundings go well with the sky. I love the color green so i love it. You should take more ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: A person i drew

    Wow. I love the hair! It is all spiky and it makes me think of the yugioh characters. The shading you did in his face is good. But i dont ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: green eye

    I love it! I personally love green eyes and the way you made the green pop out among the white is amazing. I love the lashes too. The way they ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: girl

    I like this but you need to pay attention more to human porportions. Her face is too skinny and her head is like a pitchfork. Her hair is nice but ...

    Sep 27, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: HG

    Interesting. Hmmm... I think I like the obscurity of the picture because you do not see stuff like it every day. It is unique. I like the angle you took ...

    Sep 27, 2009


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price