emmylou1995

Okay, I really like this. It is different than usual. I like your imagery and the vocabulary you used. It gave the poem almost a...phantomy-like feel. :) I like the ...

I absolutley loved this poem! It was beautifully sad and the wording was wonderful. For me, the repitition was awesome. This poem brought tears to my eyes, it was so ...

My Only Treasures The morning sun brings upon us, not golden light but death. Death is such a one-sided argument, we have no choice but to listen to its shadow-thickened ...

I love this poem. It is beautiful and simply eye opening. It addresses a topic that many girls, including me, have faced. i loved the imagery and the language you ...

INT. DULLY LIT CHILDS ROOM – NIGHT TIME A young couple hurriedly dresses their sleeping baby girl. They both wear long purple robes adorned with golden bells. They are rich. ...

Eternity A young girl named Adina discovers, through the use of a strange power that she wields, that she is the offspring of Life and Death and that she must ...

Thanks everyone! Yes, this really is about a boulder. It was fun and kind of hard to write. I'm glad you guys like it.

Faith...don't let me drown, in this ocean of pain. I want two legs...two hands. I want a tongue...I want teeth. I want freedom to move...and freedom to sing. I need ...

I love the colors in these photos. They give every flower its own uniquness, something that I don't usually see here in New York. Alot of the stuff here is ...

Chapter Three [i]I sit by the firelight. The flickering arms of the fire reaching out to take hold of me. The walls around me moving along with the shadows. I ...

This was brilliant. Simply genius.

Hey! Could you reveiw these few things for me? One of them has two chapters and has not been revised yet. Thanks!

Hey could you review these things for me? Thank you, for it is greatly appreiciated. and (There is a second one. It would be great if you would read it ...

Oh my gosh. Wow. This is absolutley heartbreaking. I love this so much. Thank you for writing this, I really needed to hear those words.

A Suede Boot Soft golden light from the street lamp outside my window wavered upon my blankets. The early morning cold bit at my limbs. My eyes popped open as ...