emmylou1995

Blue Flying. The waves of an ocean, a robins egg, the cloud-filled sky. Crying. A whispered prayer, the mist over the mountains, the rippling pond water. Believing. A childs sleeping ...

Yellow Laughing. The rising sun, a miniature canary, the song of life. Dancing. The softness of butter, the warmth of hairspray, the aroma of curry. Trusting. A glass of lemonade, ...

I think this is a great start to a poem. The beginning is beautiful, with the definitions. But as the poem plays out, its not really clear what is going ...

Memories dance on the fringe of her conscience, hazy and forsaken, as the years drag on and on. Her skin is dry. Deep creases litter her eyes, her neck, her ...

It's Just The Way It Is I lay on the roof of the garage, staring at the transparent silver stars. The soft pink light of the morning sun bathed over ...

I like this, though you need to fix the fourth line of the first stanza. It has too many syllables. The story seemed a little bland, though it was cute. ...

this was an absolutley amazing piece. so much emotion and sadness and pain. you really made the reader feel for the main character. such a sad story, and such good ...

Oh....My....Gosh!!!! Thank you for writing this poem, it is now one of my absolute favorites! Its so true in my life right now! I like this guy and were total ...

I really like this poem. It made me really wish spring would just come already. I'm still in winter. I like the last part of the poem the best. About ...

I really like this poem. As almost everyone else has said, its very dark. But it is also very intimidating. Every word is true in the sense of reality and ...

I really liked this poem. It was a great display of emotions and feelings and imagery all tied into one. For one thing, I definatly felt as if the beginning ...

I liked this poem. I agree that this could be the basis for a better and more deep poem. The idea and theme is good. Add more imagery, less...I don't ...

"Considering that in my world, when you show your affection to someone by simply doing the Ritual of the Red Crow together, and not go on a 'date' (whatever that ...

I loved this poem! So much emotion packed into so few words! For me, I don't know how having someone in your family die of cancer feels, but I do ...

Death is such a one-sided argument. We have no say, no choice in when to go. To live is to die and to die is to live. When one is ...