emmylou1995

Thanks for the help and advice! I worked on this poem for a while. Glad you liked it. I have another poem called "Look at the Children". It is posted ...

Look at the Children Look at the children without a home with nothing to eat just skin and bone. Look at the children living on the streets coiled up in ...

Thanks for the help. My dad says the same thing about the fragments. I'll work on it.

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It did not actually happen to me. Thanks for reading it.

Deliverance Lilian lay on the soft, white bed, holding her newborn daughter, Elexandra. The room around Lilian was simple and white. There sat a plush chair in the corner of ...

Creepy. Creepy but really good. I have never read any poem with so vivid blood. I especially like the last two lines: When you finally emit a scream The dripping ...

Alone :cry: Mother's laying on the ground, Lifeless, breathless, dead. A pair of glassy eyes, a plastered scream, On her cold, pale head. How could this fever strip me, of ...

That did help thanks. I dont know how to post things in the community or disscusion forums. Can you help me?

i need a name for a dark and rocky world. a world where evil sorceresses dwell. Please help!

i loved that! it is a really good poem. i doubt mine are that good.

Wonderful! That really helped me know what dramatic poetry is!