emmylou1995

Somehow, the moon had always looked lonely to Sabora. Up in the sky, nobody to talk to but the stars. All it did, night after night, was watch its precious ...

All the leaves have fallen from their branches. A thousand brown holes peeked through the snow white bark of the birch trees. Several crumpled brown plants rose up against the ...

Thank you all, and yes, the next few chapters will be very forthcoming. ANd for some reason, my italics thing doesn't work. SO the last two sentances are in italics, ...

She held the child close, wanting desperately to keep it in her arms, but knowing it would never be safe if she did. She stroked the childs cheek, the daughter ...

I have split the first chapter into two parts to that it is overall easier to read!

Chapter One, Part Two Aralyn took the back way to the house, cutting across the meadow behind the village. The five foot high weeds were golden this time of year, ...

This was just beautiful! I'm sorry if you are actually going through that, and the only thing I thjought about the whole time was the movie My Sister's Keeper. But ...

I have, sadly, had experiance in this area of expertise. And I must say that you captured the feelings and mood perfectly. I cried at the depressed part because thats ...

Chapter One, Part One Aralyn leaned against the old oak tree whose gnarled trunk protected her from the icy autumn wind. She closed her eyes, breathing in deeply the scent ...

Amazing poem. I almost cried at the stanza where we find out that he died. Thats so sad.

This was totally awesome! I liked how all the sentances flowed together.

I absolutley loved this! At first, I was kind of confused at what it was about, but then when I read the name of the song, I understood. So, yeah, ...

Okay, I like the idea of the poem. I really do. As others have said above me, it is a good idea but not very original. Its also very not ...

I really liked this poem. It was very clear and true in this modren age. Everyone lives for others, well, not everyone but you get my point. I think some ...

Oh my god! A D&D sword fight, epic! I absolutely loved this soooooo much!!!!!!