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Re: A Burwood Tale - Chapter One
I absolutely fell in love with this! When Chris climbs the tree to impress the girls he sounds like a real teenage boy. i love the description of him thinking ...
Oct 17, 2009 -
Re: Of pictures and places (updated 10-3-09)
I loved the inlet, the summer home, the rainbow pins and the great blue heron. All of the pictures have great senses of angles and light. For the insect ones, ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: A few reasons why BLACK SUCKS
I like the first one. And yes, it is noticeable.
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Soma
Very realistic features! I love this drawing. I love how the light shines onto her eyes. It gives her personality. I also like how you did her nose. It actually ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Photography by me
Awesome! I absolutly loved the last one. For some reason, nature and ice just look really good together. I love the angle at which you took the second one. The ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: White Tiger: Lucas
Wow! I love this! It looks so real. The right eye is smaller and somehow differantly shaped than the other one. What did you use to draw this? pencil? charcoal? ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: The Great Minnesota Get-Together
I agree with Juniper. A little like just snapshots. I really liked the last one. (Not the soiler). It had a great sense of color to it. Also, the slide ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Same picture: different filters
For the first ones, I loved them. They really stood out to me as colorful and cool. My favorites were the flir, neon and smoke. great job. As for the ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Character Sketch ~ Harsh Critiques Needed!
I think the head is too small. It is what caught my eye first and i think it would look better just a bit bigger. And the right thigh is ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Pretty Fish
I love the contrast between the bright pink and the bluish designs. It adds character to the fish. the eyes are awesome but they look more human than fish and ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Masks
I love the designs around the left eye. And, I am all for the color blue. Like Mira said, it adds good contrast, the different shades of blue. Great job ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Deliverance: Prologue
I fixed up some of the nitpicks! I hope it is better!
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Name the Character Above You
I would think either Ezmeralda(Ezzie) or Isabelle(Isa or Belle). Or maybe Bailey or Jessica. Anyways here's mine.(She is not actually a character from my story but i need a name ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Rate The Charactar Above You
I thought this might be good practice. What you do is post a paragraph on one of your characters and rate the character above you. Simple but interesting. I'll start. ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: Rate The Idea Above You!
It sounds like it could be interesting, if you used the right descriptions. 6/10. Mine: I was thinking that I would write a story about the early days of the ...
Sep 28, 2009
