emmylou1995

Okay, I liked the bottom of her hair, it is very flowy and pretty. I loved her bangs, though they seem a little flat. I think you need more of ...

Okay, I think lush, wrath and envy are the best. They have the best faces and hair and seem the most spot on than the rest of them. Personally, for ...

Wow! I like to draw figures but I mean wow! You are good! I like these parts the most: Her left arm and hand Her skirt The lamps The desk ...

I love the second wolf drawing. The last three are also extremely mind blowing! with the colors and style, Wonderful! The only nit pick I have is the eyes on ...

Oh gosh! Beautiful! I love the colors of the second picture! So luring and yet magical, like its from another world. For the third one, I liked it the best. ...

Okay, I liked your drawings, even though I absolutly hate skeletons! On the first guy, I think his nose is too high? Or is it just me? Anyways, I think ...

Nice! I like your description of the warehouse and the moon. The whole thing with the shadows, though? I'm not digging it. The main characters thoughts were very...into is and ...

Okay, interesting idea. But, the writing needs alot of improvement. You need less talking, more description. What does Grannies house look like? What does the dog look like? WHat does ...

Okay, Shishu95, I think Elinor is right. Its falls a little flat. Maybe, instead of using just the girls feelings and thoughts, you could incorporate them into a small prologue. ...

I think that your poem is interesting, Isha. I mean, sure, its not really, really, good. But you do have some talent. For me, I think you need to losen ...

Hi, Papersolstice! I liked your poem. The very idea of it is interesting, why do we ask why? But, at the same time, I believe that Galerious is right. Well, ...

Title- Prologue: Diamond Fire(Revived) Genre- Fantsy Fiction (Third Page) Length- Not very long, maybe two pages? Link- Thank you so, so much! I am posting first chapter soon!

Trust me, I know that I need more. But this was for a contest, sorry for not making that clear. The contest stated that I could not use voice tags ...

“I really don't think he meant for it to happen this way.” “What are you talking about, Nella? You're just lovesick. He did this to hurt you...” “No, he loves ...

I love your drawings! The ones of the city are cool, very detailed. I like the sushi sign too. :) For the paintbrush, my god. Its perfect, just perfect. There ...