emmylou1995

I really love how the light between vibrates off your fingers. It shows alot of cool contrast. I would possibly suggest sharpening the face a little, like add some more ...

I like this poem. It played with my emotions, which is interesting because I have the same kind of doubts. I think you might want to try to fix up ...

Thanks everyone! I actually wrote this poem after listening to the song The Only Exception, by Paramore. I loved the song so much that I used its lyrics ideas to ...

I didn't mean for anyone to get hurt. The strong breeze interwove with my hair and started to dance, lifting my black curls to the sky. My face fell warm ...

Wow! I love this! Well, its actually really, really ad, but amazing. I didn't find anything wrong with it. I especially like the last part where you say "I remember ...

Okay, here goes. One- In this picture, the flower petals are too blurred. Either take it from farther away, or with a clearer view. I like the color though. Two- ...

Kneel This is the poem that cries in the desert of time, that kneels on the sand, because in darkness the stars are bright, because in darkness we see what ...

No Weeping Once I savored loneliness, I thought it could explain, the reason why I felt so lost, the reason for my pain. Only now do I see, that loneliness ...

I think you have an amazing style. At first, when I looked at the drwings, i waslike, "Hey, that moon looks weird, and why are their curls on the pianists ...

[quote="KAH"]How could someone so nice die? She was happy, understanding, and inspirational. Everyone she met became touched by her. She knew how her life would end, She saw it coming, ...

Dear Benjamin, You said the train was safe. You told me I would be fine. You promised you would be at the station in Chicago when I arrived. Before I ...

Thanks. I really worked hard on this. I added some more about the mans wife, I hope the story is better now.

Screams rang in my ears. Blood and dirt was everywhere. Death was all around me. Time seemed to stop. The rush of adrenaline pumped through my system. I felt my ...

I don't know if this is a good start for a book or not. I just wrote it, its only half a chapter. Hard core reviews are good. Chapter One ...

I need to know if this is a good start for a novel. Chapter One The fire had completely burnt out during the night. I woke on my cot, freezing ...