emmylou1995

Oh My gosh! My name is Emily! That is so coooooool!

I love he curvature of your eye! The righ side dips down so gracefully. And, like WolfGirl, I love the colors! She's right, it makes your eye and skin glow ...

This is a song from my book in progress. Around, all around, the shadows gather. The light for which we always yearned, flared once, then died. A time of peace ...

Hey, could you review these two short excerpts of mine? Thanks. and

I like this. The way you worded it was nice. As someone said before me, the ye's were confusing at first, but then I realized it was old english. I ...

Actually, this is an excerpt from my thirteen chapter novel that is not posted here on YWS because I cannot figure out its name yet.

The trees of the forests are old, their bark brown and rotting. I could almost hear them whispering histories past, stories of bravery and might, of secrets made in times ...

One late autumn evening, long ago, a young girl was camping with her parents and siblings on a mountain. The mountain was beautiful in the daytime, the sun shining off ...

Okay, i just want to say, wow. I love these. You do such a great job with taking a picture and really capturing it in a drawing. For the first ...

Thank you so much! This being is not a human, it is an elf. This peice is actually in one of my books, but I wanted to see if other ...

I liked this. It was very short and to the point. I would like to know more though. What happened between them? Why was her heart already in a thousand ...

I think this poem is good, but it could be better. Add more imagery, add emotion. Don't repeat stanzas like you did as well. If you add imagery and line ...

The young woman’s silver eyes glowed like the moon and stars. Her dress of blue silk hung to her ankles, lightly sweeping the wet forest ground. Her hair was long ...

Slender beams of silver moonlight enter this darkened prison as I kneel. I am always cold, always lost. I am frozen here, waiting. Robed forms wrought in panes of glass ...

I really, really, really like this piece. The stem and leaves are beautiful. I think you should definitely smudge the lines a little, and make them darker as well. I ...