emmylou1995

I really love this poem. My two favorite lines were: Tongues so laced with candid wish AND From a fevered mind and fleeting kiss Beacause they really show and don't ...

I'm All Your Living For I don't know what to say, And I don't know what to do, And I don't know how to get it across, That I'm in ...

An Unexpected Visitor The thin straps of my short blue dress kept slipping from my sweating shoulders. Music pounded loudly in my ears, making my head ring. The room was ...

Chapter Two The entire left wall of Gaendir's study was covered in bookshelves. Upon the bookshelves sat hundreds of old manuscripts and tiny odd bits. The right wall was covered ...

I absolutley love these! You are so talented. I am also an artist and these are better than alot of my works. You are really, really talented.

I think this was funny. It made me laygh and I really needed that. I love how the dude actually took out his heart! Thats so awesome! (though sort of ...

Okay, I liked this alot. Stanza One: I think this one was the most not interesting of them all. I mean, I liked it, but there are some things you ...

Well Cspr, again I will explain my story. At this point, I wanted Nayima to be a little....um, too independant and liking herslef too much. later in the story I ...

Well, Cspr, here is what I have to say. First of all, I know what you mean about the time lapse and I think I fixed that in the paragraph ...

Chapter One Vibrant colors of orange and red danced in my peripheral vision. Wooden stalls of sweet candies and cloth spanned the courtyard wedged between the castle and cathedral of ...

If anyone can help me think of a better name, please do. Prologue My Moms cherry red hair fell in front of her eyes, their mossy green color shining through ...

Hey! Will you review these for me? and and if you are able and are up to it, and

Yay! The first chapter of my fantasy novel!

Chapter Two I stood in the field of golden weeds, thin and wispy in the strong morning wind. The sky held fluffy white clouds in its misty blue eternity. I ...

Chapter One The frustration overwhelmed me, leading me to curl my fist and punch the tree beside me. My knuckles split open and blood rushed towards the ground, slowly weaving ...