emmily

The Rose in the Snow The night seemed to mock her. The moon shone contentedly as the snow glided gently down to the sidewalk. Couples strode down the street, hand ...

As she stepped out the window, Rachel entered a new world. Spring turned to fall, and (don't need the comma here) the green grass was covered by crackly, brown dead ...

I watched as the guards ran about. They all seemed to be doing something, whether barring the doors, swinging the curtains down, or calling My Lady and My Lord. The ...

Interesting beginning. I'd like to know more about the main character fairly early: description, some hint at personality and so on. I'm not even certain if this character is male ...