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Re: The Masquerader (Prologue)
Hi meg, I like your concept so far. This prologue gives a lot of information in a very short length of time which may not be the best thing for ...
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Re: Chasing Normal Ch 2
CHAPTER TWO Gathered around the fire that night, the conversation was stilted and awkward. Kaida had consumed her dinner and now sat silently, with her back against a log, observing ...
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Re: Chasing Normal Ch 4
CHAPTER FOUR The hike back to campus seemed to take forever. Andrew and Cat had decided that the best thing for the kids would be to forget about that night’s ...
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Re: Chasing Normal Ch 6
CHAPTER SIX “You’d think this would at least earn us a get out of jail free pass or something,” Jared complained to no one in particular. “Forcing us to go ...
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Re: Chasing Normal Ch 10
CHAPTER TEN “What have the others been told?” Melanie asked as she followed Cat down the trail away from the safe house. “Just that we went away for a few ...
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Re: Chasing Normal Ch 8
CHAPTER EIGHT Now that they were alone, Cat settled down on the bed, and turned her attention to Melanie. "Why don't you start by telling me what you remember about ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Chasing Normal Ch 9
CHAPTER NINE The pounding on the door continued. "I know you're in there," a stern male voice shouted from the front porch. Reminding herself to breathe as she crept silently ...
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Re: Chasing Normal Ch. 7
CHAPTER SEVEN Melanie pounded on the bathroom mirror in frustration, pausing every time someone stirred in the next room. She knew that if anyone walked in, they'd make her go ...
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Re: Chasing Normal Ch 5
CHAPTER FIVE Janika turned the lock slowly, listening for any sign of movement outside. The hall had been quiet for a while, but she wouldn’t put it past Cat to ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 7
Chapter Seven I wiped a tear away from my eye as I ate a bowl of warm soup for supper the next day. The soup tasted thin and old, and ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 6
The action in this chapter was nice. It was good to see Alwin getting involved with the group even if she didn't do quite what she was supposed to. I ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 5
Chapter Five My heart pounded as I stood exactly twelve feet away from the target in front of me. “Am I right on target?” I asked Robin, “or should I ...
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Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 4
Chapter Four I felt heat rushing through my body as the sound of voices came into my ears. Whispers rang through the forest and the clanking of dishes suddenly ceased ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 3
Chapter Three I wiped away my tears that I had been holding in for an hour now. My mother was buying a few spare eggs from our neighbors, Elouise and ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: My Robin Hood Chapt. 2
"When the birds first sang the waking call through the village" I think this is my favourite line so far. I like Ivy's attitude in refusing to go along with ...
Oct 30, 2010