emmer132010

To the Sea And I saw such majesty in her eye That I could not look away from her; Such splendor, such brilliance was the sea That I felt I ...

Well, I decided to come back to it a bit before I go to bed. And like Snoink said, there are a lot more than I am pointing out but ...

Okay, I won't be able to go through all of this at once but I'll try and come back to it once I have more time. Okay, I know you're ...

Wow, really great poem. There is a lot of emotion here. I like how your rhyme was not always exact and very subtle (Not screaming "Look at me! I rhyme ...

Thanks for the positive response! This is one of my favorite pieces I have written and I was a bit apprehensive about how it would be received. Thanks again!

Composed on a Misty Evening in February I cannot see what lies before me, I cannot see what lies behind. The lampposts to me are as celestial orbs, Rising out ...

Very short and cute poem. To be honest, I couldn't help but smile when I read it. I don't know if I can offer any real criticism on the poem ...

Very cute poem! I too love socks. I think it was mention earlier but I'll just say again that the days of the week should be capitalized. And my only ...

Haha! I loved it! I am a big fan of Dr. Seuss myself so I liked the lightheartedness of the poem. I agree with Kayde2 as well; the word "fluple" ...

Of Endless Summer Days and Daffodils My, how such long summers have past, Slipped through eager fingers Cast up in bright exuberance to catch the sun, Whose rays have smiled ...