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Luke would have to kill his sister but he'd choose to just inject her with something while she slept so it would be as painless and peaceful as possible. What ...

Luke: Get all up in the person's face. Steven: Sulk. Julia: Punch 'em in the nose.

Luke: To turn back time and be able to make better choices. Steven: That Luke wasn't my brother. Luke: Thanks a bunch, dude.

My favorite part was the last line. You really make it clear that this event meant something to you, that this person meant something to you. I'm definitely glad to ...

I think this is fantastic! I always wanted a big brother to be my best friend and look out for me, so I feel like I kind of get what ...

I really like this. It's honest and it really gets the point across. I can feel your pain. :( This is a short review, I know, but I hope I ...

Adam Lambert's Biggest Fan :)

(Characters are siblings, from the same story) Luke: I'd apologize to my brother for being an idiot most of our lives. Steven: I'd tell my sister that she means the ...

Thank you for the review! I will work on it and keep your advice in mind :) EDIT: Here, I've had another go and added to it: I wish I ...

Luke: I regret having a conversation with my ex in which I told him that I loved him. Steven: I regret overhearing said conversation. Julia: I regret having a conversation ...

Because it makes me feel alive.

Name: Luke Morrison Gender: Male Age: Seventeen Race/Ethnicity: Mixed (Half-white, half-Indian) Height: Approximately six foot. Weight: I haven't decided yet, a little skinny I'd say. Build: Lean but

Luke--man up and start punching the bear right in the face. What would your character do if a random person came up to them and kissed them?

Would you review this poem for me, please?

I'd love to review some short stories or poems. :) I'll be as honest and as kind as I can!