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Glee if that counts as a band/artist. :) Lily Allen Blondie Kings of Leon Fleetwood Mac All-American Rejects Neon Trees

Luke smiled at her. "No big deal," he said. "So, Spirit. Um, that's an interesting name." He flushed, clearly embarrassed. "Sorry. I'm not great at talking to girls."

You did a really, really good job! The "countdown" was a great idea and was really effective, too!

My favorite haiku is the last one. :) Really lovely. I envy your talent--I wish I could write like this!

Poppies grow among the mossy stones, about and around them; Some rest their heads on these stones as on a pillow for weariness; And the rest toss and reel and ...

Hate me, hate me, hate me, I would have maybe taken out the third "hate me" Is that all you can do? You don’t even know me--- But I've seen ...

Oh dear, it's you -- you're looking marvelous today your hair is knotted because you forgot to comb it, and your clothes aren't clean -- you wore them out on ...

I really love your piece. It's beautifully written. Good job on this. You're great at lists--why don't you try doing a few more?

That's a brilliant poem, nekros. It really is. I have absolutely no criticism. Just brilliant.

I liked the dialogue in the first part, keep going! It's pretty fun. :)

I always listen to music when I write. It's very inspiring and it really gets your creativity flowing. :D

Luke: Jeans. Julia: Boots. ;) What's your favorite land form?

Luke: Pizza! What is your favorite drink?

"Nothing right now," said the young man. He turned to Spirit and nodded at her. "I'm Luke."

I think this is interesting. Your words are actually sort of original for this type of poem. There are a lot of poems like this, but it's still original, and ...