emilym1178

This is story I'm writing for a school assignment. Just give me as much input as possible, and help me with an idea on how to make the transitions. Where ...

I really enjoyed this piece. I related to everything she said and inferred. I could feel what she felt, and see what she saw, and even hear what she heard. ...

this was so good. You wrote this in a very creative and emotional way. I haven't read anything like this before. I enjoyed the style a lot. I felt like ...

The Good Earth by Pearl S. Buck The Pearl by John Steinbeck The Tattooed Girl by Joyce Carol Oates. DON'T READ THESE. EVER.

I love all three. They are great! However, I don't think that the first one captures Winter. At first look I think of Autumn, because of the leaves. After you ...

This is my second story on YWS. My first one was a longer story which took a while to adapt from a number of real life experiences. I am going ...

I absolutely love the second two. The second one is by far my favorite. I feel like i can see into her soul and her emotions. It is amazing. Completely ...

Seriously. I clicked on that all to read a link, and not a good story like i wanted to. I got a description and a link. I'm extremely disappointed. I ...

Seriously. I clicked on that all to read a link, and not a good story like i wanted to. I got a description and a link. I'm extremely disappointed. I ...

I love where you are going with this, however i think you could use stronger vocabulary. Instead of using simple words like soft and shiny try something else like, smooth ...

This poem was truly inspiring , with its theme of non-violence . What is it really worth? I loved it . I was slightly to into the poem to make ...

This story was amazing. Even though it was about a guy liking a girl, i could relate to the emotion, and of course, the eyes. I know whats like. Minus ...

As I walked down the hallowed halls of fourth floor Irvine Hall I heard music floating throughout the hall it seemed to be coming from room 414. I went to ...

CHAPTER ONE: Olivia January 23rd 2010 I locked the door behind me as I entered the bedroom, Victoria, Robin, and Jayce following closely behind. "Hide it" I motion my finger ...

This is a very good story, however the storyline= very gossip girl. I liked it though. Just add a little sparkle and more dialogue to make it your own. And ...