emilym1178

I'm going to be completely honest right now. I didn't like it. I felt that the complex vocabulary and the amount of imagery took away from the realness of the ...

I love the way you layed this out. It was very creative and capturing. I usually can judge if i will like a piece based on the first two sentences, ...

It was just me making something up to encourage people to write. Showing how simple it is. Showing how you can start with something so small and develop it so ...

This piece really sums up how I think a lot of people truly feel. Its a very intense feeling. I loved how raw and realistic this was. However, you may ...

This story is simple i can lay it out in just a few sentences and you will get it. I want to be Jewish. Thats what I want. My family ...

Comment. Gimme feedback. this is a true story but, names have been changed. haha. so yeah let me know what you thinkk. hey you! yeah you, with the short brown ...

i loved this story. mostly because iv'e been in that possition and i get it. partly because i liked the harry potter and asian utensil analogies

the story in its self had a good plot, kind of generic, but something a lot of people can connect to. I enjoyed how tha story sort of unfolded before ...

Though you may not think so, I thought this was a veryyyyyyyyy good piece. I enjoyed how each sentence began with the next letter in "cherry stems". I felt that ...

Dear Max, Do you remember? I looked up, and awkwardly caught you looking at me and giggled. You winked at me. I just smiled. Do you remember? You said you ...

This was really deep, and honestly quiet hard to understand. Depending on what sort of audience you are writing for this could either be AMAZING or it could be confusing. ...

i liked this a lot. a lot. a lot. a lot. However, I feel that the reader needs more of a picture into the MC's mind. I feel like at ...

this was very good. I appreciate your gift for writing, not just anyone can do well with a poem like this one. It was really good. Greatttttttt Job!

i really love this story, it displays a high school stereotype that i hate, and one i love. The PDA couple, and the cute, quiet couple. I really enjoyed it. ...

I liked your story a lot! there was a lot of good material and great ideas. I liked the five steps of doom thing a lot also. I would say ...