emilyleigh

I actually really like this, it was really descriptive. There were a few grammatical errors. “It didn’t matter now,” he thought to himself while grabbing at a leafless branch for ...

I fell into my cryptic state and let my eyes roll back. I watched the rattle tap lighly on the ground and listened to the hiss, hiss of deception slithering ...

Hi! This was well written, but really random. I know it is based off a dream, but that doesn't mean you should write it exactly as one. No dream makes ...

It's pretty good but there are some parts I feel are a little cliche. To fix that, show and don't tell. Like, when you say, "You hurt yourself physically and ...

This was a dream of mine, one that I actually remembered. So I wrote it all down, and I realize it needs work. But is the idea worth working on? ...

Thanks for the revisions Snoink :) It was meant to be literal, and then the end to have some religous meaning. I wanted it to be able to be interpreted ...

I don't think that timing really matters, each person works at their own pace. But I think for most people they wrote their best poems fairly quick and out of ...

Okay, so i know this poem needs a lot of work, I just wrote this without really thinking or anything, and I feel the ending needs some I would love ...

I liked your poem, it's usually harder to write a happy poem, at least in my opinion, and this one was pretty good. I just have one suggestion, and that ...

I like short poems that have simple words, because i feel that they really do hold so much more pwer and emotion. However, you do need to have punctuation in ...

Wow that was really good! Lots of poems lose me attention quickly but I really wanted to read all of this one. The only thing I found that I would ...

EEP! Yes, we will get along well, lol. I am kind of obsessed with them. Well... not obsessed, but my room is full of pigs and everybody gets me pig ...

Hi Emily welcome to YWS! I'm peanut or Sarah *gives a piggy* I like them too and I think you'll get along fine with Snoink ;). Awesome I see you ...

Hey Emily, welcome to YWS! :D I'm Snoink... or one of the green goblins on YWS that you can go to if you ever need help! So... questions, eh? :D ...

My names Emily, I'm 16 and I live in the US. I've always enjoyed reading and writing, but began to realize it's my passion when I started highschool, thanks to ...