emilyleigh

Hello:) Could you take a look at this short story I wrote?

Hi there! Could you please take a look at this short story I wrote? It's a first draft and I like the bones of it, but know it needs some ...

Firstly, what do you guys think about polyamorous people? Do some people have more than one soul mate? Or are these people just wrong in some way? The other thing ...

Oh you're right! That was just a typo, but thanks for catching that :)

I had an assignment to write a play that is five pages, consists of only one scene and only three characters. When read out it should be about 3-7 minutes, ...

I like the concept of the story..I've always loved "What if's" in love stories. However, when I read this, the emotion falls a bit flat. I think, if there were ...

I enjoyed the essence of this poem.. however, personally, I think that the questions in this poem make it a bit cliche at times..especially, "Was it so wrong in asking ...

Thank you everyone for taking the time to read this; I appreciate it very much. I'm very glad to hear that you all enjoyed my poem. I usually stick with ...

I think this poem was very interesting, intriguing. I liked the ease of the rhyming and the mystery of whatever it is you seek drew me in. I really love ...

This is something I wrote earlier, a poem separated into three parts. I feel the first part is the weakest. Im worried about this poem being cliche. Input from anybody ...

A young girl of round ivory underneath a rosy sheen and painted lips sat at a medium sized table, her body folded loosely together. In a café full of unwanted ...

The room is dim, lit only with candle-chandeliers that hang mid-way. The walls are beige but give more of an orange tint in the candlelight. The room is open, not ...

Hey, I really like your poem :) There are just a few sugestions I have for you that I think would make it better. You are a woman who has ...

Who can fill my empty heart? When there never was an ignition to start. A barren chest deflating the pain, let's fill up instead with gasoline. Gasoline, to start a ...

That's pretty good for the first poem you wrote, but there are two main issues I have with it. One, is puncutation. Not every line is a sentence, and punctuation ...