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Charlii101 wrote: (the year is 1872) The sun beamed down on my sweating back and my ginger hair fell down below my shoulders, A semicolon should be put here or ...

I think its a really good poem! I mean if you're just starting out, then its okay. Not everybody makes an awesome, universally wowing poem on their first try. If ...

Lola I plopped down in front of the fire after going around and making sure everybody was comfortable for the night. As comfortable as one can be in the middle ...

Thanks for the characters guys!!!! Feel free to start anytime or to add any new characters!!!!!

I totally agree with Camdapirate and TheTruthLiesWithin!!!! Please write more!

Hey, Sionarama! Let's start with the good: Good job! You were right, this is suspenseful! I think its cool how you kinda just throw the reader into the story. At ...

Hi, Hibiscus! I totally agree with red leaf. This was a really good poem! There wasn't much to say bad about it. And it was fun to read. Good job!!

Hey, pazey13! This was a really excellent piece! You followed the YWS "Show, not tell" phrase perfectly! Plus, I can totally relate! I'm scared of roller-coasters too! You described that ...

Oooo, nice! I like the Hunger Games a lot and this is really good! If I'm not mistaken, Haymitch is the mentor for Katniss and Peeta right? I've never really ...

oooooo.......... sorry! i couldn't figure out where to write!!!! thx!!!

I love the way how its all pink and then you see a little bit of the yellow center! This is like one of those once in a lifetime moments! ...

Bolt, I really liked this because I'm into this kind of thing. I personally think you did really well. I really didn't even catch your mistakes because I was so ...

Tigersprite, you crack me up! I feel the same way about hip-hop! And yes the tornadoes are a football team, but they are also our basketball, softball, and soccer(your football) ...

Ok, so I guess I'll start with the simple stuff: Name: Emily Jo H. Age: 13 Height: 5' 2" (i think I'm shrinking) My fave band is the Jonas Brothers, ...

NAME: Lola Scott GENDER: Female AGE: 15 APPEARANCE: dark black hair with one dark purple stripe in the front. Ocean blue eyes PERSONALITY: bubbly, loves to have fun and make ...