emilybrodo

Thankyou for the feed back, i don't write many peoms, i shall fix these mistakes although some i don't understand why they're wrong, for example: 'Yet continue i must'. It's ...

Intriguing beginning to your story, your characters personalities are nicely developed though due to little description it's hard to imagine them, and when describing try not to be sudden and ...

I prefer the first picture, but that's just me(love black and white). The expression on her face says she's strong, and i love the way her hair is swaying. Her ...

My soul rots away, My heart turns to dust. My body I do not own, Yet continue I must. For life is too short, To let life waste away. So ...

This is absolutely amazing, your use of words just jumps out at the reader, i'm thinking that you are already great, but that you may just be a best seller ...

The way you use personification is brilliant, mixed with raw emotion really paints a dark picture. [i]The shackles of ignorance[i] really paints the picture that the selfishness holds down the ...

Selina woke to a sickening chuckle. Her vision became clear, and she saw a dark figure looming over her. Selina scrambled away from it until she was panting in fright, ...