emilybrodo

Ok, I'll start to put up the whole book, I'm just a bit worried about the first chapter being boring. But thank you for all the advice!!

Believe it or not, posture effects how you feel, if you slouch, you'll become depressed, so first of all: 1. Find a good place to write that is comfortable and ...

When writing, ask yourself: What could they see/smell/hear/feel/taste? - With every paragraph. I also listen to wordless music that suits the scene your writing. If you use the same word ...

Stop being so smart!!!! Yet another awesome poem? (jaw drops) Perfect rhyming, good sound words. Assassin's knife - pure awesomeness I mean that sentence is so creative and gives such ...

Yeah the girl is possessed. Poor girl ha ha

Yet another brilliant story, and the good thing about it is that I somewhat know who the characters are. I believe that Gorden did write something as brilliant as this. ...

It's funny how this got so many views because of the message 'please don't read' I may just use that from now on. 'strokes chin thoughtfully.' XD XD XD

Thank you guys, these comments are amazing! I'll be sure to fix anything that brings my story down, and I have posted a bit more of my book if you'd ...

Diabolos had had enough of the demon's pathetic threats and thrust his arm towards her. Like a massive hand had bulldozed into her stomach, she flew across the room and ...

This is kind of creepy after reading the spoiler, the fact that it makes sense to the child to harm itself, but to others it's a crazy action. I love ...

Your story is very short for one thing, and very unclear. You describe the sound, which is good, but when I'm writing I think: What can they smell? What do ...

I like this poem because I can relate to it in a way, some guys are so weird. Anyway, you rhyme almost all the way through, I don't know about ...

Hey, I'm not an expert on photography but I know a thing or two, hope my general opinion will help! Photo 1: So cute, might want to get rid of ...

I remember sitting in class listening to this and thinking, is it possible to have your best friend as your idle? Well, I have come to the conclusion that it ...

I can understand how I got the punctuation wrong, thank you for helping me with that guys. But i'm wondering, do I keep the full stops? Or do i delete ...