emilybrodo

I would really appreciate it if you reviewed this first chapter of my book, just want to know how interesting it is. Thank you!!!

How long have you been on YWS?: Since last December What was your motivation for joining?: I think that the idea of this club is very creative and would be ...

This is a doll my mum made, it's named after me: Emily. Anyway she is thinking of making more dolls similar to this to sell and would love some reviews!!! ...

I'll let you know if any do turn up!

Nah, didn't see any and I haven't seen any in my photos, but you never know! A ghost might turn up!

We went to a graveyard for religion, kind of weird I know. My camera's just a cheap little thing, I didn't really put much thought when I took these photos. ...

Went on an excursion to a graveyard for school. Reviews would be awesome!

It seems that whenever I get a review I have trouble following The reviewer's advice to make my work better. I want to become as good as I can get ...

Sometimes the smallest things can inflict a pain that dwells in our hearts eternally, whether it is a snicker from a stranger, a harsh word from a friend, or a ...

Wow! 'Jaw drops' I love it!!!!!!!!!!!! Please sign my shirt. Due to the fact that I'm suffering from a massive writer's block this is the best review I can give, ...

Reviewing this for me would be awesome!!

Thanks for the review, this makes me feel so good about my writing. One thing though, I don't exactly know what you mean in your second point, further explanations would ...

Hope you enjoy the beginning of my book, thought it needed a prologue. I wrote it in a day and although I've repeatedly edited it probably has many mistakes, so ...

Thanks guys, that makes so much more sense! I shall make sure I use them correctly and I'll fix all of my mistakes. XD Oh and thank you for such ...

I have this problem that whenever I come to something owning something, Microsoft says it's wrong. For example: is it- it's sheath was silver or - its sheath was silver ...