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The creature is meant to be seen in the way that the reader sees the creature. For one reader, it might be a Giant Elmo (I don't know why it ...

Squeak. Squeak. Squeak. The trampoline squeaked as Payton jumped, up to the sky. She strived to jump higher and higher, causing the trampoline to squeak more. Squeak. Squeak. Creak. Payton ...

This is a very, very powerful...story...if you can call it that. Nonetheless, I loved reading this. I like the whole "...teddy bears to night terrors, gummy candy to acid trips..." ...

Thanks, that makes a lot more sense about the mafia thing. I think I might use the playing the piano in an angry way because that makes more sense too. ...

I didn't really like this too much. It was quite odd, and I didn't like the fact that this was a masturbation story. It didn't make sense, and I was ...

Thanks, I will fix those first two things. To answer your questions: Their family is very, very rich, and she assumed that his bet was just about money, so it ...

It felt a little childish to me, the whole boogers thing. I think you could have done better with that, and made it a little different. I'm glad that she ...

Wow. I have to say, this was very interesting to read. I liked it a lot. Keep writing. I also have to agree with the first poster, the first paragraph ...

I actually disagree, I thought this was a great piece. It was very interesting to read, and I quite liked the going back in time thing. What grade did you ...

Mafia Baby: Prologue "Abele! Come down here please!" That was the first thing she heard when she opened her eyes that morning. She dragged herself out of bed, scuffling her ...